Sane rants on an insane world. Read at your own risk. Don't blame me if your head explodes.
Such was my reaction when it went live. :-DAgain, thanks for the help. You pointed out that I needed to tell the readers things I knew at such a gut level that I didn't realize that the reader *didn't* know what I did. If that makes sense.
That's awesome! Starting the read this afternoon, so should have a review up in the next couple of days!
Your feedback on the early draft was a huge help.